Thurible ideas presented at second crit and feedback

Here are all the ideas I presented at the crit. I wanted to see people’s reactions and see what people liked. Scroll down for feedback.

close up

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cut out alone

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cut out with candles

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cut out with candles covering both pages

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cut out chain up right print

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flowers least close up

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flowers med close up

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flowers very close up

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made with Nadia

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Two white boxes

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Feedback

I was surprised some people actually liked the white boxes I used. Most people agreed that the pictures with the altar and the flowers behind looked too busy so I wouldn’t use those unless I cut the thurible out. The beams in one of the pictures aren’t needed. I asked the tutor which idea stood out and he said he liked the one with the blurred candles behind and the cut out thurible in front and others agreed. I will pursue this idea. People also commented on the typography and said the title should be a bit bigger. This crit was very helpful to me.

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