Crit and feedback for ‘thurible’

Here is the feedback I got at the crit.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

My evaluation: I forgot to take this to the crit. I like the picture but the photography tutor warned me against putting images in the gutter because a lot of it would get lost. I have found it irritating in the past when I wanted to look at a picture and a lot of it was lost in the gutter. So I won’t be using this layout.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This idea makes a feature out of the smoke more than the thurible. I won’t be using this idea as it is here.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The tutor mentioned that the picture of the thurible could be made bigger and I totally agree. I wont be using this idea as it is here but I’m glad I tried it out.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The tutor asked me to consider that a nice background might improve the picture. She asked if the church had flowers. I said I didn’t think so but I would check when I went to visit. Lucy (http://lucyhelm.wordpress.com/) said a good background to have would be a cross. I wasnt sure if there were any crosses there either. It was helpful to get this feedback because I didn’t realise the background would be important as you can see from my ideas.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Update: When I went to the church it did have flowers and some crosses so I tried my best to get some pictures with these backgrounds.

Advertisements

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s